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New Ditty

Post by Ashley »

A new ditty of mine hehe, enjoy!! :grin:
Titled 'Virgin with Wings'. \m/
https://ashleyhm.bandcamp.com/track/virgin-with-wings
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Re: New Ditty

Post by DollarBill »

Your music production has come a long way since you first started. Rock on!
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Re: New Ditty

Post by Heigen5 »

I think it is good. But if you'd care to know my humble opinion, you could add one extra track, into your songs, that is something else than the ordinary guitar, drums and vox. It could be a synth, vocoder, fx, piano etc. I think it would take your music to a next level. But yeah, otherwise - great work on the song! 8-)
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Re: New Ditty

Post by Mr. Marty »

Orc music.

Production is spot on. Though, it could use some stage placement with respect to the elements. The drums are spread nicely but the vox and guitar just kinda mash together, almost like a phasing issue. Could try a phase shift on both vox and guitar. Guitar could be a tad more up front