by Citizen Dolly » Sun Aug 01, 2021 5:48 pm
Love the feel of the first half of the track - especially that little detuning of the opening synth. I agree with Marty that some of the hihat / cymbal type sounds are a little loud and piercing. That switch-up in the middle caught me by surprise. First time listening I wasn't too keen on the bass sound - a bit dry and plain for my tastes I suppose, but it has grown on me a little with a second listen. Still seems to stick out a bit aesthetically from the rest of the track. Also I really dig the drums on the middle section: the kick rolls and that - that's right up me alley.

End section is nice too, with the synth sax thing. Good to see you developing the songs more.

Love the feel of the first half of the track - especially that little detuning of the opening synth. I agree with Marty that some of the hihat / cymbal type sounds are a little loud and piercing. That switch-up in the middle caught me by surprise. First time listening I wasn't too keen on the bass sound - a bit dry and plain for my tastes I suppose, but it has grown on me a little with a second listen. Still seems to stick out a bit aesthetically from the rest of the track. Also I really dig the drums on the middle section: the kick rolls and that - that's right up me alley. :hihi: End section is nice too, with the synth sax thing. Good to see you developing the songs more. :thumbup2: