by Citizen Dolly » Thu Jul 15, 2021 6:19 pm
I like the individual elements of this - the opening synth line and especially the bells and touches of strings. However, I also felt like the arrangement could be snappier as the repetitiveness kind of runs it into the ground. I suppose if the aim is to keep it fairly minimal, the thing to do would be to edit the overall length down. Personally though I think a better idea would be to instead build it up and further develop it, introducing more layers and sounds. Just as it stands it seems to me like it has masses of potential to it. I'd particularly like to hear the strings build up and come to the fore. I can really hear this getting lush and verdant, sort of like a timelapse of plants and flowers blooming. Anyway, canny effort.
I like the individual elements of this - the opening synth line and especially the bells and touches of strings. However, I also felt like the arrangement could be snappier as the repetitiveness kind of runs it into the ground. I suppose if the aim is to keep it fairly minimal, the thing to do would be to edit the overall length down. Personally though I think a better idea would be to instead build it up and further develop it, introducing more layers and sounds. Just as it stands it seems to me like it has masses of potential to it. I'd particularly like to hear the strings build up and come to the fore. I can really hear this getting lush and verdant, sort of like a timelapse of plants and flowers blooming. Anyway, canny effort. 8-)