by Citizen Dolly » Wed Jul 07, 2021 7:53 pm
I like the synth arps and the guitar. Vocals are quite interesting too - maybe some distortion could be good on them? Might fit that sort of industrial angle. The "doof doof" kick drum sounds like it's bleeding through from a totally different song with a totally different tempo though - that's pretty jarring. Overall though, I do have a softspot for this mix of sounds, and it'd be cool to see you continue to work in this sort of direction.
I like the synth arps and the guitar. Vocals are quite interesting too - maybe some distortion could be good on them? Might fit that sort of industrial angle. The "doof doof" kick drum sounds like it's bleeding through from a totally different song with a totally different tempo though - that's pretty jarring. Overall though, I do have a softspot for this mix of sounds, and it'd be cool to see you continue to work in this sort of direction.