by Heigen5 » Mon May 24, 2021 10:49 pm
Citizen Dolly wrote: Mon May 24, 2021 8:36 pm
Lasagna Pirate wrote: Sun May 16, 2021 8:59 pm
Wtf ist „pseudo-German“?
Dutch?
I don't know enough German to know if he's just making it up. Recognised a few words, but he might be blagging it for all I know.
Anyway, decent tune. The vocals seemed a bit cheesy for my tastes - reminded me of that old techno tune "Ein Zwei Polizei" - though the vocal melody was pretty nice. The spoken parts seemed a bit too loud, both compared to the singing and just generally. Nice synth work, but the beat was a bit too vanilla, in my opinion. Never been a fan of these plain electro type drum tracks. I guess drums can't always be the focus though.
Some words are real deutsch, but some not. Anyway, thanks for peeping it. The spoken stuff too loud? It's Henry's fault, he always wants my vocals louder.
Anyway, you like the synths and vocal melody, but not the drums. Fair enough, I think I'd like to change the ending of this song, might give it a shot. But yeah, it has become a tradition to sing in the foreign languages. It's fun.

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Wtf ist „pseudo-German“?
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Dutch? :lol: :oops:
I don't know enough German to know if he's just making it up. Recognised a few words, but he might be blagging it for all I know.
Anyway, decent tune. The vocals seemed a bit cheesy for my tastes - reminded me of that old techno tune "Ein Zwei Polizei" - though the vocal melody was pretty nice. The spoken parts seemed a bit too loud, both compared to the singing and just generally. Nice synth work, but the beat was a bit too vanilla, in my opinion. Never been a fan of these plain electro type drum tracks. I guess drums can't always be the focus though. :shrug: ;)
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Some words are real deutsch, but some not. Anyway, thanks for peeping it. The spoken stuff too loud? It's Henry's fault, he always wants my vocals louder. :lol:
Anyway, you like the synths and vocal melody, but not the drums. Fair enough, I think I'd like to change the ending of this song, might give it a shot. But yeah, it has become a tradition to sing in the foreign languages. It's fun. :twisted: